Academic language assessment week 17

The benefits of importing Chinese goods do bot outweigh the consequences. For example, America could save fuel resources that it takes to IMPORT the goods into the country. This shows that, we would have more resources that we could use in our environment. The U.S would have more jobs available for Americans who need them and wouldn't have to EXPORT materials out of the country and wasting more time and money. The money we make off of the products would go back into our communities and help them FUNCTION far more better. We would literally be the most self sufficient country in the world. In conclusion. America would be better off providing for our country instead of wasting valuable resources and money in another country.

Jammer dinner

I had a lot of fun at the Jammer dinner. The dinner was held at the Del Mar race track on the top floor. When we walked onto the floor where it was held Jammer was there to greet us and so was our sponsors. They had appetizers and juice for us to munch on while we waited for the real food. The sponsors at my table were really nice and told us about their jobs and how they met each other. It was really sweet. When the food came I was really hungry and so were the people sitting at my table. They had this buffet of pasta and salad and that filled me up pretty fast. After we ate we were whisked downstairs to pile onto a hay ride so we could see the parade of lights. The race track was full of lights of different types of sports and snowmen. By the time the ride was over I was freezing cold and wanted to hurry inside. We got desert and hot chocolate was served on the lower level and we got to sit outside by a fire. When desert was finished we were told to go back upstairs so we could get our presents. I hurried and got on the elevator before anyone else because I was eager to get my presents. I got to my table and they told us to open our presents right away. I didn't want to ruin the wrapping paper, but after five minutes of trying to be gentle I stated to ripped the paper off by chunks. I got a girls basketball, Skull candy headphones, and a New York city poster that I really wanted. I didn't really get what I asked for but I'm still grateful that I got something, because there was twenty children that did not make it to Christmas.

Shooting in Connecticut

I am very sad about the shooting in Connecticut. For example, most of the people killed were five to six year old. I have two baby sisters and one is six. My sister and I never really bonded and got along. If this was to happen to her I would be despondent and I wouldn't have forgiven myself because I sort of favored my two year old sister more because I practically raised her. My sister Miracle is a bit more complicated but I still love her. Learning about the shooting only made me realized that you could lose anyone at anytime. So I'm going to make an appoint to spend some time with her and really give her a chance. I learned to appreciate my family more and to not take things for granted. I hope this would be the last of things like this tragedy. I pray for the families that didn't have a child to take home on that horrible day. I hope this is a valuable lesson for those who keep guns around a child who is mentally unstable and take them to shooting ranges.

Irony in "Lamb to the Slaughter"

The irony in “Lamb to the Slaughter” makes the story memorable. For example, the detectives stated, “Probably right under our noses. What do you think Jack?” when they sat down to eat the leg of lamb (p.324). This shows that, the detectives were unaware of the lamb being the weapon, but the audience knows what it was used for, which makes it dramatic irony. This also shows that, the reader is amused because they know that the weapon really is under their nose. For example, Mary yelled, “Patrick!...How are you, darling?” after she got home from the vegetable store (p.321). This shows that, she blatantly tried to act like everything was normal even though she knows he is not okay making this situation verbal irony. This also shows that, the reader is interested in how she is going to act when she finds Patrick dead. In conclusion, Mary Maloney keeps the reader guessing based on her behavior and how she handled the murder of her husband.

My night at Target

The trip to Target was so much fun. I had practice right before we left so I had to rush home and take a quick shower before I was rushed out the door. The whole campus piled into the three buses that were available to us. On the way there I was thinking about what I was going to get . When we got there regular shoppers were curious of what was going on. Half of the people left within the first ten minutes we were there. When I got my paper that told what I could get and what I couldn't I was a little upset. I mean how are you going to get $200 and not spend some of it on food. I decided to head to the entertainment section and that's where everybody was. I got some movies and then I headed to the boy section because they always had the best stuff. I got a two flannel shirts, Angry bird boxers, pajamas, blanket, and slippers. I then headed to the bedroom accessories and got a new comforter and pillow case. When I was done I headed to the front of the store and was surprised. The line was wrapped three aisle's and I had to jump in line before anyone else got in front of me. I waited for about 30 minutes before I was checked out and ready to get on the bus to go home. We waited 20 minutes more for more kids to pile on with all their merchandise. We headed home and I was super tired and ready to knock out. When we came home I went straight to bed.

Ambiguity paragraph

The ambiguity in “Notes in a bottle” engages the reader. For instance, a man with connections to Washington DC says, “Why haven’t we been informed?” This clearly states that the people are unaware of the cause of the natural disaster. This shows that, the reader has to come up with the idea his or herself. On the last entry the main character explains the scene in front of him is “ The water is swirling around the skylights now. The wind shifts. The waves are coming straight in from the Atlantic.” This shows that, the reader is contemplating what the outcome of the story is because it causes you to come up with a ending yourself. This also shows, the ambiguity is apparent in this last paragraph because you don’t know what really went on from that point on. In conclusion, this story attracts the reader due to unknown information.

Academic Language Written Assessment Week 15

Cell phones are not safe to use while driving. For example, Some people have a hard time ASSESSING the situation before they check their text messages putting themselves and other drivers on the road in danger. This shows that, you might think that they are capable of handling the responsibility, but you never know what's around the corner. Some people do not get the CONCEPT of constant distractions when texting or talking while driving. By past experiences in my life I can RELATE that not everybody is capable of multitasking while keeping an eye on the road. In conclusion, I truly believe that cell phones should not be in mind while trying to be safe on the road.

Academic Language Written Assessment Week 10

Women should not be required to sign up for the draft. For example, men have always held the responsibility of fighting for our country. This shows that, it's a FACTOR that women should not have to fight in a mans quarrel. This also shows that, women shouldn't have to be put in a situation where she has to leave her children just because men can't keep the peace. In addition, men purposely PLOT to use a women's freedom as a reason to sign up and go to war. This shows that, men have taken advantage against women just because we chose to use our VOICE to gain out natural rights. This also shows that, women can choose to join the military on their own accord, but they shouldn't have to be forced. In conclusion, men should stick to being the fighters of this country and women should be able to do as they wish.

Academic Language Assessment week 9

Vending machines should be banned from high schools. For example, students spend more time and money on the snack utilities other than their studies. This shows that, they should pack an ALTERNATIVE healthy snack if they know they're going to get hungry in the middle of the day. This also shows that, kids eating habits are not disciplined enough to make healthy food choices for themselves if half of their allowance is spent on junk food. If students still get hungry in the middle of the day they should make a STRATEGY so that they are not making unhealthy lifestyle choices. I'm not bashing on all vending machines, because some of the machines offer healthier food items. For example, in hospitals they offer fruit and alternative snack items.In my PREVIOUS school they encouraged children to bring fruits and vegetables for snack instead of heart attack food that will effect them later in life. In conclusion, vending machines should be kept at bay in high schools so eating habits in the future will not have a bad outcome.

Academic Language Written Assessment Week 8

The ten commandments do not belong in public schools. For example, the content of the CATEGORY might be a sensitive subject for some people to handle. This shows that, Mixing religion and school subjects is not a good idea because it could cloud the judgement of  a teacher and his/her teaching methods. This also shows that, the important subjects that kids need to learn might not be paid attention to, because time can be CONSUMED by the teachers personal beliefs. Their are private schools for religion if the parents want the subject to be taught to their children. For example, the private schools offer special classes that teach and also preach about different religions. This shows that, public schools do not need to teach these subjects because you can pay a fee to have your children attend certain schools if you wish. Being religious is a personal reference and not everybody believes in religion. Religion shouldn't have to play a ROLE in education if you do not have a desire to participate in churchgoing activities. In conclusion, the separation between church and state should the same because it would prevent complications from occurring.

Keona's Paperless Classroom Orientation

Keona's Paperless Classroom Orientation Unit Assessment 2012

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Academic Language Written Assessment Week 5 9/27

Vaccinations should be required for all children. One reason is, the children should be able to be sent to school without the worry of catching a dangerous disease. Children are far more vulnerable to virus's because their immune system is not that strong for the hard hitting illness's. Second reason is, the vaccines have a 90 out of 100% chance that you will get POSITIVE results from the treatment. For example, measles broke out among unimmunized immigrant children in South Califorina causing an ESTIMATE of 43,000 cased and 101 deaths. If these people took the initiative and got the regimen they would have had a better chance of surviving this epidemic breakout. Third reason is, the children getting their immunization done while they are young can ILLUSTRATE a bright and better future for their health. In conclusion, Vaccines have a better chance at preventing an epidemic of sickness and giving people a chance to have hope.

academic assessment week 5

The pressure in tern sports has gone too far. One reason is some parents CONSTRUCT a schedule based on their sports, and they still expect their children to perform well in their studies. Although, sports do offer a SIGNIFICANT amount if scholarships, but their grades and focus led are sacrificed. Third reason is, some teenagers don't know how to IDENTIFY their priorities and academic goals. In conclusion, academics should be everybodies priority not sports.

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 4

Parents should regulate their kids diet. What children eat in their childhood can CONSIST of terrible eating habits when they are able to decide for themselves. Parents should want an APPROPRIATE diet for their children so they can be as healthy as they can be. Doing this for their children can help a big problem we have in America to day. Also, their children won't have any problems in the future FOCUSING on healthy foods and exercise. In conclusion, this shows that parents should care about their kids future and want them healthy so they can be role models for other people.

Choices - Week 3- blog post

What is something I dislike about myself?
I would have to say my patience with people. One reason is, I'm to nice and I let people run over me when I know they're doing it. The one thing that really gets me is when people take me for granted and they know I'm not the arguing type. When I blow up on them and they want to know why I have such a bad attitude I tell them and they usually leave me alone after that. Second reason is, it's one of my best qualities and that's what I get recognized for the most. Third reason is, I never really speak my mind unless it's necessary. So, if someone is trying to start an argument with me I would just talk calmly and that makes them look like the bad guy. In conclusion, having patience can be a good thing and a bad thing, but overall I'm glad I have it because I have to deal with the people on this campus.

English 10 Academic Vocabulary Paragraph

You should go to jail for harassing someone via text and on social networks. One reason is, if you really have a problem with somebody you should confront them not harrass them when they are in the comfort of their home. Some people are AFFECTED differentely by verbal abuse because it's strictly mental not physical. Second reason is, studies show that some people are not able to MAINTAIN a good sense of mind when they are verbally abused on a daily basis. In addition, people shouldn't have to go through that everyday.This shows that, pushing someone's boundaries are not good because you do not no their limits. For example, bullies will go the extra mile just to make someone's life hell because they have problems of their own. This also shows that, if you can waste time attacking people by using TEXT, then I think that person can spend some time in jail and think about their own problems for a while.

Choices - Week 2

My favorite book is "Perks of being a wallflower" written by Stephen Chbosky. This is my favorite book because it kind of explains the life of a kid named Charlie that was wasn't quite correct, but nothing was wrong with him. In the beginning of the story it talks about his good friend Michael who committed suicide. This leaves him with no one to talk to and he wonders why things work the way they do. Eventually he is introduced to Sam and Patrick. They are like the leaders of the wallflowers, but they are proud of that. They make Chalie see that being popular isn't everything and to embrace your true self. Later in the story you find out that Patrick is gay and his boyfriend is the quarterback of the football team. Charlie swore not to say anything about it because he was one of his best friends. Charlie begins to develop a little crush on Sam but doesn't say anything about it. He doesn't want to jeopardize their friendship. Sam is a senior and she has to graduate leaving behind everybody including Charlie. In this story Charlie experiences everything from sex, drugs, and having fun in the matter of two months because these two wonderful people came into his life.

Grammer: noun

Paragraph- Future

I genuinely believe that I will achieve all my goals and even more in the future. This past year has given me so much insight of the what the future holds. One insight is, how much you have to be determined and focused to stay on top of school work and extracurricular activities. Another thing is, balance. In my case I was juggling many activity's at once such as Basketball, Keyclub, and school. I eventually found equality between all of them and was able keep my grades in good order. Since I found these things I know that in the future to apply these skills to my college career. Another important goal for me is to become valedictorian of my class and to leave SPA with a exquisite reputation for my future achievements. Anything is possible if you put your mind to it. So I will do anything in my power to make my future bright.

"Romeo & Juliet" Before You Read Part A

In the last weeks of the semester we are learninng about Romeo and Juliet. Of course we have to know about the author before we go into their best work. William Shakespeare is one of the greatest writers in the history of the english language. He wrote numerous plays, a bunch of sonnets, and a whole lot more that hasn't really been talked about. William was born in England in 1564. He was married at eighteen and moved to London later on. By 1594 he was popular forhis play writes and acting around the around the cities. William's history plays told the history of kings, rulers, and days gone by. He also wrote comedy plays, tradgdies, and romances. Most of his plays were performed in the globe theatre which was very popular. Shakespeare died in 1616 at the age of 52. Even though he died his legend still lives on as well as his plays and fantastic writing shared all over the world.

Romeo & Juliet - Love at First Sight

I do not believe in love at first sight. For example, in this movie Romeo crashes the Capulets party and spots Juliet prancing around in a robe dress. Then he starts going off about how he never felt so much love at that very moment. This makes me furious. He just saw her this makes no sense to me he does not even know her name at this point, and he is already confessing his love. I understand that this is a story and in some cases this just might happen, but come on! Furthermore in the story Romeo decides to boogie down on the dance floor with the rest of the crowd and just so happens that his dancing partner becomes the one and only Juliet. Then this character that has nothing to do with the plot comes on screen singing for hours. Then all the sudden the two "meant" two start searching for each other in the crowd jumping and knocking over people. Then they found each other and he grabbed her hand and she pulled away! Then they start having a conversation about sinning. Then they kiss! They just said that in touching of the flesh and caressing of each other was a sin, THEN THEY KISS! What goes on in Shakespeare's head beats me but this just does not happen . I can't express how much This story really irritates me.

I love daddy meerkat

I love meerkats there soo sexy. I cant get my mind of them I love that meerkats have bigg eyes. And I wish i was a little meerkat because i would be a G ass meerkat. Im just sooo happy that a meerkat touch my hand ever since i never washed my left hand. Im soo in love omg omg daddy meerkat

JCCS Academic Language Written Assessment Week 38

Video games should be used in school curriculum. Children learn the ASPECT new subjects when they are interactive during school activities. Kids like to be connected to there school work. The CONSEQUENCES of being in tune with your work is very good results. Educational games make people happy and they pay more attention to certain FEATURE'S when they are having fun. Games in a school setting is a great idea and will have better outcomes and children will want to participate more during school.

JCCS Academic Language Written Assessment Week 37

The fast food industry should not be able to target kids with unhealthy food choices. One reason is, targeting on SECTION of children is considered rude and inconsiderate knowing they don't make correct choices. There is a THEORY that the food items served in restaurants hold more calories than a regular meal at home. Additionally, some of the food you can make at home are SIMILAR in looks as the food in restaurants, but way more unhealthy. Food at home is way better than restaurant cookery any day because it saves you money and from gaining unnecessary weight that could be avoided. The food industry loves to trap people who are weak in judgement when it comes to food because they know they choose wrong.

Personal Changes Blog Paragraph

 When I was a freshman, I was quiet, anti-social and didn't like to be around a big group of people. Now, It's the end of the year and I'm more confident and I don't spend most of my time on the outside of conversations I'm mostly in the middle of them now. For example, When people used to talk about themselves and want to have a full on conversation with people I would be the first one out the door. This shows that, I was would get really nervous talking about myself to people. In addition, I like talking to people now and getting to know people on campus because I see them everyday. This also shows that I have prospered in my social skills and enjoy being around my friends. By my senior year, I hope to be the ultimate socialite and get to know every before I leave SPA.

SPA Policy Blog Paragraph

One policy that I wish could be changed is the self pass rule, because I believe that some fifteen year olds are responsible enough, and more mature than others.
Currently, this policy states that you had to be 16 to go off campus by your lonesome and to go off campus with your friends without a staff.
One reason it should be changed is some 15 year olds are able to handle the responsibility and trust that is required of them in order to get this privilege. 
If this policy was changed, I would definitely try to get this privilege pronto, because I've always wanted to know how it felt to be by myself at SPA without a staff lingering around in my alone time.

JCCS Academic Language Written Assessment Week 35

Sweatshops are a violation of human rights. One reason is, Every freedom law APPLIES to everyone who is a citizen in the United States. Another reason is, when people make a CONTRACT with their employers they did not agree to be treated like an animals, and be taken advantage of because of their desperation for work. When people work for their bosses they should have an accurate LABOR time on how many hours they work a week and a day. Nobody deserves to be mistreated when they are doing some other person's job.Their work sight in which they work at should have proper conditions such as air conditioning, bathroom, and lunch breaks. In conclusion, Everybody has equal rights to be treated human when it comes working and trying to make a living for themselves.

Academic Update Blog Paragraph

My academic goal is to not procrastinate and not fall behind on my classwork and homework.

This task involves not getting distracted by my peers, personal issues, and remain serious during my classes.

I want to do this because I do not want summer school and I want to be taken serious when it comes to taking care of  school business. I will achieve this goal by making sure I don't make mistakes when it comes to turning in work. I will remained motivated to become a excellent student this semester  by putting all my effort and determination in achieving my 4.0. In conclusion I have every intention of getting what I want and becoming what I call a star student.

JCCS Academic Language Written Assessment Week 34

Cell phones should not be allowed in schools. In CONTRAST some teacher's believe that electronics could be used as a brand new tool in school, but evidence has yet to prove that it is not a distraction in a classroom setting. Some kids do not have the right CRITIQUE on when it is appropriate time to bring cell phones out in class, yet again leaving us to believe that they cannot handle the responsibility of being trusted. Teacher's with strict rules still have problems PERSUADING their students to leave their electronics out of eyesight and in their bags. Although, upperclassman have shown the ability to only use their phones for educated purposes some children just can't handle the anxiety of not answering their phones when receiving a message. In conclusion, kids cannot be trusted to only use their cell phones at appropriate times.

JCCS Academic Language Written Assessment Week 33

American students are not falling behind in academics.COMPARED to other countries we have better resources and a better chance at getting a good job. The RANGE of student capabilities vary between each student. Although, in other countries the students have more determination because their life styles aren't as fortunate. The school system here is a lot less complicated because we can collect DATA about students and their education level, so if they need help they can receive it. In conclusion, America has a better education system, and we are successful in academics.

Ironic Story Blog Paragraph

Once upon a time, there was a young couple and they lived in Bronx, New York in 1986. They had three young kids and the dad had 2 jobs. The mom always took advantage of that and could never really keep a job to save her life. To relieve stress both of the parents had a therapy of their own. The dad played the lottery and the mom ate truffles and she wouldn't share with any body. Eventually, the bills of their therapy's started to rise. The dad said that she had to stop buying all those truffles because they were really expensive. She told him that if she had to stop buying truffles he had to stop playing the lottery. They both agreed. The dad had different idea's and decided that if she didn't find out he could keep playing. He was always a big dealer when it came to dishonesty. The mom was the one who always decided to make her own plans but now she told herself that she was going to stick it out if he was with deal. One day, The mom was washing clothes and came across the receipt with the price of a recent lottery ticket. She was furious. So she marched on down the to the corner market and bought twelve boxes of Truffles. She went home and cleaned then she waited in the kitchen and started eating the chocolate luxury's. The dad came in and saw her eating. For an instant he was raged then he realized that in his back pocket was the lottery ticket he had just bought. He understood that she found out and he felt ashamed of himself. He apologized and so did she. In the end the lesson is you can't demand something then turn around and do the exact same thing. Hypocritical.

JCCS Academic Language Written Assessment Week 32

A student should not have to pass a high school exit exam in order to earn a high school diploma.One reason is, the cost to DISTRIBUTE the test could be really expensive and some students don't have the resources or the money to pay the fee for the exam. Another reason is, students shouldn't have to pass a test  before OBTAINING a diploma, becasue they should be prepared if they already went through four years of high scool. Additionaly,the The subjects in which the students should be tested in VARY from what jobs they wish to acquire. This makes it difficult to test the students on the right skills. In conclusion, Students should always be able to graduate and get a diploma if their grades and effort is put forth. I disaagree with the paragraph, but all the words go with no.

Academic Language Week 31 - Teen Vandals

Parents of teen vandals should not be held responsible for their child's damage. One reason is because their children will not be able to ACHIEVE a better understanding if their mistakes are not paid for correctly. If the child is not given a SPECIFIC punishment for the damage, they will never be able to function in a society if they do not understand the rules. Children need to COMPUTE their consequences without an adults help. In conclusion, parents should not be responsible for their child's actions.

Spring Break Blog Paragraph

During my spring break my mood was boomeranged between relaxing to exciting. For example, I got to have the experience of going to Hollywood with the high schoolers in my house. The outing was really fun because we got to spend time with our house mother Debrah. This just shows that being responsible can give you great results in return. In addition, I also had the advantage of going to a Key Club convention in Santa Clara. This is event was an abundant experience that I was glad to have the satisfaction of going, and getting to know my fellow key clubbers from other districts. This just shows that being a key clubber gives you a lot of opportunities to travel to places and become a better leader in our community. Looking back I realize that I had a exceptional spring break and I can't wait for Summer to come.

Academic Language Week 30 - "D" Grades

D grades should not be eliminate. It would be to complicated trying to keep up your grades. Kids with learning disabilities might get frustrated with the grading system and give up trying. It would be harder trying to keep up with the education than just giving up.

Academic Language Week 29 - School Conferences

Parents should not face jail time for missing their child's school conference. One reason is because parents shouldn't have to be present at a conference because there are other ways of TRANSFERRING information about their child. Using emails is a good RESOURCE of contacting the parent about their child's behavior and grades. If the child does not SEEK help from the parent then they can always go to their teacher for assistance. It can be very difficult for parents to take time out of their work schedule to attend a conference for their child. It is very important for children to get a good education, but it can be very hard for parents to always be apart of their kid's education. Jail time is unnecessary for parents as long as the child is being cared for.

R.I.P. TRAYVON MARTIN

Trayvon Martin Paragraph

George Zimmerman should be charged with murder for shooting Trayvon Martin. He does not have any right to take the life of a teenage boy who was obviously innocent. I thought that our country was rid of racial acts against each other, my thoughts were clearly wrong. This man has noticeable traits of being conspicuously absurd by taking matters into his own hands and killing this exemplary young boys short lived life. He should have already been taken into a psychiatric ward if he thinks that he was going to be harmed by a 140 pound boy who was caring ice tea and a bag of skittles. The odds are not going to be in his favor if he was taken to the courts. I am glad to hear that his parents are educated and are able to take this to the media so that justice is brought to this monstrous man. He should not be given the condonation of prospering in society if he is going to bring harm to anymore young black males that he is always succeeding. This situation will only upraise until the law is change in Florida he will not get away with this racist act against this blossoming young man.

JCCS Academic Language Written Assessment Week 28 Practice Paragraph

G.P.S devices should be required for habitually truant students. The person that ADMINISTERS the device might be able to keep track of the student much more efficiently if they knew where the students was at all times. The rebellious student could learn how to have the proper CONDUCT if they are constantly reminded of the device connected to them physically. The person who issued the system to the student could use the ELEMENT of surprise when the student is off track and being defiant towards attending school. This system could be really effective and keep students more on track with their lives. They could also get the education that they need in order to be successful. 

Rain, Vacation, or Zombies vs Vampires Blog Post Paragraph

I would rather be bitten by a vampire. With a vampire attack their could be more perks or doom for your life. Vampires are far more powerful then a rotten corpse walking around growling things at you. In the time of the attack you could just be bitten and turned into on of them or they would possibly just use you as dinner. Zombie's on the other hand are a totally different story. They eat your flesh while you are still conscience and writhing in pain while they continue to devour every ounce left of you. If certain events were to occur and you bitten were bitten, you become extremely beautiful and indestructible with unbelievably super strength. I would rather become a vampire because I would become even more awesome than I am now.

JCCS Academic Language Written Assessment Week 27 Practice Paragraph

School officials do have the right to use drug- sniffing dogs to find drugs.One reason is, these dogs are trained to RESPOND to the smell of the drugs and other substances that are illegal. People don't have the same abilities to ASSUME that someone actually has drugs on them, but dogs could recognize the smell immediately. The dogs that are used for this task go through the PROCESS training to get the smells right and to be able to pin point what location the drugs are held. These are highly effective and they should be used everywhere.

Testing Thoughts Blog Paragraph

I feel that taking the California High School Exit Exam is necessary and should be taken more seriously. I know that next year I have to make sure that I try my hardest and to do my best in passing the exam next year. I am a little concerned that some sophomores don't take the test seriously and might fail to pass it. I will make sure that all measures are taken in order to pass the exam. I am confident that I could pass the test with flying colors because I am able to pay attention in class, and I have the determination to fulfill my goals of not taking the test more than once. When I see my CAHSEE scores next year I hope to see 100 in both English and Math.

JCCS Academic Language Written Assessment Week 26 Practice Paragraph

I would not want a car that drives itself. When we PROCEED to make things that make us less independent we become more lazier in our everyday lives. If the car's computer was to have a malfunction a fatal accident could OCCUR for the driver, and the other drivers sharing the road. The METHOD of making our country dependent on technology could possibly enhance our economy or make go down the drain even more. Our country needs to focus more on ways to save us rather than ways of making it easier to get around in machines that could be causing the problems we have today with global warming.

Poetry Project Assessment

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Homonyms Practice Blog Paragraph

It was our second game of the season, and we were all excited for this one. We were playing St. Josephs and we were positive that we were going to win the game. We went to a rec. center gym because THEIR gym was under construction. When we drove THERE all I could think of was concentrating on the game, and not let anything get me down. When we arrived at the rec. center we got out and immediately got looks from the girls moms and dads. I didn't let that phase me though. we knew that the team was going to be late THEY'RE always late to the games. We stared warming up after we put on our shoes, and took off all of our jewelry. I was starting that game so I had to make sure that I warmed up and stretched the right way. When the game started we were on fire! In the first quarter it was 17 to 8 and we were invincible. I was taken out of the game for rest, then things started to get bad. I guess we started thinking that we didn't have to try that hard because the other team was losing anyway. Boy were we wrong! Have you ever had that feeling that if you pushed just a little bit harder that you wouldn't had failed and let YOUR team down? That's exactly how I felt when I was put back in the game and I didn't try my hardest. It's the worst feeling in the world when you believe that YOU'RE the reason for YOUR teams lost. I learned a lesson that day, if your put your full effort into everything you do great things will come out of it. We lost that game but we lost with dignity..

Academic Language Week 25 - Concealed Handguns

Adults should not have the right to carry a concealed hand gun. This can ESTABLISH problems with children because they will think it is okay to be violent and to solve their problems with violence. Carry a concealed hand gun would INDICATE that they're armed and dangerous even if the gun cannot be seen. They may use the gun for false pretensions and harm themselves and others. Some may JUSTIFY that guns are just a source of protection when really it is basically stating that violence is the solution. If you really think about it, some adults can be pretty dumb sometimes and it's practically saying "let's give a gun to a five year old." Not a very smart idea. Adults should be more per cautious about bringing weapons into their lives. If it really came down to it and we all had to carry a gun, that is not concealed, then it may be an appropriate time to discuss it again, but until then no adult or human being should be allowed to carry a concealed hand gun.

Technology in School Paragraph

My first experience with educating computers games was when Ms. Priester introduced the class to Quizlet.com. At the beginning my first thought was that the website was for children and we were wasting our time. Then, I started warming up to the idea because I was getting my study time in, and the computer corrected me when I made a mistake. If I didn't have the spelling list printed and in my binder; I would go on Quizlet and study the words on the computer as another resource. I found it easier to go on the computer to study the words instead of getting quizzed by my house parents. I like the fact that computer games don't have to be complicated or boring, and I can concentrate better too.

JCCS Academic Language Written Assessment Week 23 Practice Paragraph

Dog fighting should be illegal. Even though they are very DISTINCT from humans they are still living animals.  POTENTIALLY good dogs are harmed in the process of training the dogs to kill their opponent. Therefore, they are trained to have a mind set of exterminating their own kind. People should not use this FORMULA of violence to entertain and make money off of. They are apart of this world also, so they should have just as much rights as the human kind of living in peace and serendity.

Imagery in Poetry Blog Post Paragraph

When you were born I wasn't prepared for your sweetness.
The touch of your soft baby hands and your cute button nose.
I couldn't be more proud to being your big sister.
When not a morsle passed your lips yet, the smell of your breath was as pure as your innocence.
I couldn't get over the sight  your dark brown eyes when you first opened them.
I could look into them forever as if I could see your future.
The sound of your giggle for the first time made my heart fly like a baby blue bird.
I tasted your baby food when you didn't want it for a week, and understood why you kept spitting it out.

Poetry Previous Knowledge Paragraph

If I'd had a choice between a book and poetry I couldn't choose. I love books because it lets explore in different worlds of a unique author's minds. I love poetry because it's really deep in thoughts and feelings.  It taps into a whole different level of feeling and understanding for me. I'm a little more keen on poetry because it comes from the heart and soul for me and not just made up of characters. Stories give me the chance to experience the imaginary side of my favorite authors. I'm sorry I can't give you an answer because literature is the same for me in any unit. I love to read both stories and poetry.

JCCS Academic Language Written Assessment Week 21 Practice Paragraph

Professional athletes should not be allowed to use steroids. Athletes are paid to use their natural abilities in sports and if they take drugs it defeats the TRADITION of using their own physical talents. Using drugs contains getting negative side effects to their body. It is PRIMARY that athletes stay healthy so they can continuing what are being paid for. Although, in a PERIOD of time it could bring fans to the stands because their athletic performance has enhanced, it is still crucial that athletes stay healthy in a positive way.

Persausive Essay

Montanna and Rossy were top in their classes and were offered an interview on the local news. They were doing so well in their classes at SPA that they thought they should be recognized for their accomplishments and good efforts in school. They begged for Beth to let them be on t.v., and Beth just kept saying no because it was for their own safety. Finally, they gave up because it wasn’t worth the fight if they kept getting shot down and rejected. They complained to their house parent that it wasn’t fair that every other teen in San Diego were allowed to be on t.v. and just because they were foster kids they were hidden behind rules and restrictions by the judges and social workers of the court.

SPA students should be able to be shown on television. The odds of Spa kids being in danger of being stalked by a stranger are very low, because we are so far away from civilization that it would be hard to find our current location. My house got the chance to be on the San Pasqual documentary video and it was shown on the news to all of San Diego. Nothing happened to us, in fact we probably were more noticed on a positive note rather than a negative. Most of the time when we are allowed on t.v. it's for a good reason and it makes our school and home look positive and worth filming.

Spa kids should be allowed to be recognized just like any other person. Also, it shows they are the same as any other teen in San Diego by being a part of the local news. If one of the students at Spa were asked to be interviewed on t.v. because they wanted to know their life story they would have to say no because of the restrictions. If they weren't foster youth they would have been able to accept the offer and probably would have even helped them in their future. Why is fair that "regular kids" get to be shown on t.v., but when it comes to foster youth we have to be hidden from the rest of the world. We are all the same. Being a foster kid doesn't define us, and neither should rules that say we can't be shown like everybody else.

Since SPA students are not allowed to be filmed, it leads them to feeling different from non-foster youth. Foster youth only want to feel normal like other kids do. From hearing a story about having to wear a "No Camera" sticker on their shirt for a school field trip just says that they have to be hidden from society even at school events. This shows that they can't even function around their peers without being told to be on the the other side of the film. From personal experience on the D.C. trip in eighth grade I was told that I wasn’t allowed to be in a picture because it was going to go on the school website I could get into trouble with SPA’s rules against it. I was heart broken that I couldn’t even take a picture with my friends without being pushed to the side and told that it was for my safety.

In conclusion, Everyone should be treated the same. If that means that foster has to argue with the court to get the same privileges as the common teen so be it. Foster youth are more likely to be noticed as “regular” if they are given the same opportunities as kids of their age. Being apart of the foster youth community myself I only wish to get the same treatment as my peers off campus. In fact, foster kids not being a loud on t.v. excludes us even more from being considered regular.

Narrator & Voice Assessment Project - Thanksgiving 2011 - Freshman Version

November 30, 2011

English 9 - Period 3

Narrator Project

Jammer Dinner 2011

First-Person Narration from Lil’ Beyonce’s Point of View

Today is our big performance at the year round Jammer dinner and I’m super excited. I can’t wait to see all the people from last year there and the new people. Everybody calls me LIL’ Beyonce’ because they know I get down when I’m dancing. This year our outfits are purple and that’s my favorite color. The Jammer dinner is always at the Hall of Champions and it’s really neat inside. They have a second floor that is just for awards and for the people that contributed to the museum. We are outside practicing the routine when we see two big buses coming that means the kids have arrived and we can get start heading into the building. We decided to go through the whole routine one more time before going inside just to make sure we have it down. When we step inside we immediately go to the second floor to have a meeting about making sure we do our best and going out there and have fun. We Were all pumped and ready for the show. When they announced us out to the floor(stage) we all let out squeal and starting going down the stairs. It was a fifteen minute performance but we ended the routine with smiles on our faces and everybody clapped for us. We got to meet all the kids there and I hope I get to perform next year also.

Third-Person Limited Narration Focused on Montanna

Montanna was excited to be going to the Jammer dinner with her housemate Keona. At first, she wasn’t even planning on going because she had nothing dressy to wear.  She was contemplating on wearing her graduation dress from last year but decided that she didn’t want to wear the same dress twice. So her and Keona decided to “match” and wear the same top,jeans,and converse. She was satisfied with what she was wearing and decided to be more prepared for the Christmas dinner. Her and Keona headed out to the buses that were parked in front of campus. People were dressed all fancy and she was just wearing plain old jeans ,but really didn’t care. Wayne the campus supervisor told the girls to get on one bus and the boys on the other. So they both hurried on the bus to make sure that they got good seats. Right when they got on the bus everybody yelled at they bus driver to turn on the radio. When the song “I’m Sexy And I Know It” came on everybody started singing along to the song and dancing in their seats. Montanna Told Keona that it’s along dn they drive to the hall of champions so we might as well just watch videos on my phone. We listened to Keona’s favorite song first because insisted it was the perfect song ever. When Montanna put on the song “ It Will Rain” By Bruno Mars They both immediately started together. Then they finally arrived at the hall of champions Downtown everybody was starved and ready to eat. Montanna and Keona both got off the bus and ran inside to meet Quentin Jammer and to get their tables. she ate with some of the girls at the academy and they all had good time laughing and joking around. she enjoyed watching the dance team and listening to a man Named Matthew talk about his life it was really inspiring. Then it came to a end and they headed home. She fell asleep on the bus ride back and was glad that she attended the dinner.

Narrator Expository Paragraph
A narrator can influence the reader on how much  they can tune into the characters thoughts and feelings. For example in first-person, The narrator is the character in the story and  they tell you everything. In third-person limited, the narrator, who plays no part in the story, zooms in on the thoughts & feelings of one character. Many readers enjoy reading first-person narrative because they really get to look into the mind of the character.

Symbolism Assessment Project

The basketball symbolizes my effort to become part of a team where I knew I belonged because I have a position on the team and they need me and I’m making sure that I try my hardest to succeed and make Tia proud.

The  Angry Birds keychain symbolizes my baby sisters  because we usually play and watch the cartoon all day when I go on pass to see them and I miss them a lot.

The two yellow circles symbolizes my twin  because I wish I got to know her or him.

The football symbolizes my brothers because we used to play football all the time when we used to live together.

The Shoelace symbolizes the step team because I worked really hard to get on the team and I used to enjoy it a lot.

The Music Note  symbolizes singing because I love to sing.

Character Assessment Project

First Semester Projects

Plot Reading Assessment Project
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Character Reading Assessment Project
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Symbolism reading assesssment project
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Narrator Reading Assessment Project
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Persausive Essay
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Symbolism Reading Assessment Project

Narrative Essay Persuasive Essay

Persuasive Essay: Opinion Statement Brainstorm

1) middle school curfew
2)electronic rules
3)the no beach rule at SPA
4)self pass
5)not being able to take driving lessons

Which subject should I write my essay on

Keona's Symbolism String Sentences

1. The basketball symbolizes my effort to become part of a team where I knew I belonged because I have a position on the team and they need me and I’m making sure that I try my hardest to succeed and make Tia proud.
2. The I love N.Y. globe symbolizes where I want to end up in the future because I know I can get there if I do my best and accomplish my goals.
3. The  Angry Birds keychain symbolizes my baby sisters  because we usually play and watch the cartoon all day when I go on pass to see them and I miss them a lot.
4. The half of a heart symbolizes my twin  because I wish I got to know her or him.
5. The football symbolizes my brothers because we used to play football all the time when we used to live together.
6. The Shoelace symbolizes the step team because I worked really hard to get on the team and I used to enjoy it a lot.
7. The Music Note  symbolizes singing because I love to sing.

Dragons' Den First Semester Week 17: Free Choice

For my topic this week I chose to talk about the movie my house chose to watch this week for our outing. We went to go see Mission Impossible: Ghost Protocol. It was probably the best movie I have seen this year. It had a lot of action in the movie and I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. My favorite part of the movie had to be when Ethan (the main character) was going up the side of a 130 story hotel building hanging by just one of his high-tech sticky gloves. I like this movie because the suspense of what would happen next just killed me and I really enjoyed watching this movie with both of my houseparents and the whole house. I recommend that everyone should go and see this movie.

Academic Language Practice Paragaph 17

The benefits of importing China's goods do not outweigh the consequences. Everything that is IMPORTED from China is cheaper than the U.S products. What supplies we EXPORT benefits them and what goods they EXPORT benefits us. On the bright side it helps our economy FUNCTION better by giving us certain jobs. I think this trading business helps both of our economies work together, and keep the working world working for both countries.

JCCS ISP - Cyberbullying - Perspectives Video Paragaph

Hopeless Child
A boy sits at home crying thinking to himself
Why am I in this world?
I'm useless, I'm nothing to no one.
My use to be friends and family  wishes I was gone, that I was never here.
So I'll give them what they want I'll just disappear.
As he pulls out his fathers razor blade out, he starts to cry and the decision he pry's, and then he says
"I'll just get it over with."
Then he slashes his wrist then he cries and cries till there are no more tears to cry.