JCCS Academic Language Written Assessment Week 26 Practice Paragraph

I would not want a car that drives itself. When we PROCEED to make things that make us less independent we become more lazier in our everyday lives. If the car's computer was to have a malfunction a fatal accident could OCCUR for the driver, and the other drivers sharing the road. The METHOD of making our country dependent on technology could possibly enhance our economy or make go down the drain even more. Our country needs to focus more on ways to save us rather than ways of making it easier to get around in machines that could be causing the problems we have today with global warming.