Thursday, February 2, 2012

JCCS Academic Language Written Assessment Week 21 Practice Paragraph

Professional athletes should not be allowed to use steroids. Athletes are paid to use their natural abilities in sports and if they take drugs it defeats the TRADITION of using their own physical talents. Using drugs contains getting negative side effects to their body. It is PRIMARY that athletes stay healthy so they can continuing what are being paid for. Although, in a PERIOD of time it could bring fans to the stands because their athletic performance has enhanced, it is still crucial that athletes stay healthy in a positive way.

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  1. The picture is so funny and goes great with your post.

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