JCCS Academic Language Written Assessment Week 23 Practice Paragraph

Dog fighting should be illegal. Even though they are very DISTINCT from humans they are still living animals.  POTENTIALLY good dogs are harmed in the process of training the dogs to kill their opponent. Therefore, they are trained to have a mind set of exterminating their own kind. People should not use this FORMULA of violence to entertain and make money off of. They are apart of this world also, so they should have just as much rights as the human kind of living in peace and serendity.