Vaccinations should be required for all children. One reason is, the children should be able to be sent to school without the worry of catching a dangerous disease. Children are far more vulnerable to virus's because their immune system is not that strong for the hard hitting illness's. Second reason is, the vaccines have a 90 out of 100% chance that you will get POSITIVE results from the treatment. For example, measles broke out among unimmunized immigrant children in South Califorina causing an ESTIMATE of 43,000 cased and 101 deaths. If these people took the initiative and got the regimen they would have had a better chance of surviving this epidemic breakout. Third reason is, the children getting their immunization done while they are young can ILLUSTRATE a bright and better future for their health. In conclusion, Vaccines have a better chance at preventing an epidemic of sickness and giving people a chance to have hope.
Thursday, September 27, 2012
Academic Language Written Assessment Week 5 9/27
Vaccinations should be required for all children. One reason is, the children should be able to be sent to school without the worry of catching a dangerous disease. Children are far more vulnerable to virus's because their immune system is not that strong for the hard hitting illness's. Second reason is, the vaccines have a 90 out of 100% chance that you will get POSITIVE results from the treatment. For example, measles broke out among unimmunized immigrant children in South Califorina causing an ESTIMATE of 43,000 cased and 101 deaths. If these people took the initiative and got the regimen they would have had a better chance of surviving this epidemic breakout. Third reason is, the children getting their immunization done while they are young can ILLUSTRATE a bright and better future for their health. In conclusion, Vaccines have a better chance at preventing an epidemic of sickness and giving people a chance to have hope.
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I agree with you 100% and I also feel that you put a lot of thought into this post. I really like your perspective on this subject.
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