Monday, February 18, 2013

Academic Language Written Assessment Week 23

Dog fighting should be illegal. For example, it is inhumane and defeats the purpose of nonviolence. This shows that, animals of any kinds should be treated like any person should. This also shows that, animals have feelings just as developed as humans. In addition, animals should not be used as entertainment especially when they are being put in danger. This shows that, animals should not be anybody's source of amusement dead or alive. This also shows that, animals should not be pent against each other if they are meant to harm one another. The people who house and allow these events to occur should be put in jail, because this act is just as bad as putting your child in danger. In conclusion, people should not be allowed to be harm for profit and should be allowed to live life without corruption.

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  1. Whoops! You forgot the vocabulary words. You did a good job of providing commentary. I want you to work on adding factual concrete details to support your ideas.

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