SPA Policy Blog Paragraph

One policy that I wish could be changed is the self pass rule, because I believe that some fifteen year olds are responsible enough, and more mature than others.
Currently, this policy states that you had to be 16 to go off campus by your lonesome and to go off campus with your friends without a staff.
One reason it should be changed is some 15 year olds are able to handle the responsibility and trust that is required of them in order to get this privilege. 
If this policy was changed, I would definitely try to get this privilege pronto, because I've always wanted to know how it felt to be by myself at SPA without a staff lingering around in my alone time.

JCCS Academic Language Written Assessment Week 35

Sweatshops are a violation of human rights. One reason is, Every freedom law APPLIES to everyone who is a citizen in the United States. Another reason is, when people make a CONTRACT with their employers they did not agree to be treated like an animals, and be taken advantage of because of their desperation for work. When people work for their bosses they should have an accurate LABOR time on how many hours they work a week and a day. Nobody deserves to be mistreated when they are doing some other person's job.Their work sight in which they work at should have proper conditions such as air conditioning, bathroom, and lunch breaks. In conclusion, Everybody has equal rights to be treated human when it comes working and trying to make a living for themselves.

Academic Update Blog Paragraph

My academic goal is to not procrastinate and not fall behind on my classwork and homework.

This task involves not getting distracted by my peers, personal issues, and remain serious during my classes.

I want to do this because I do not want summer school and I want to be taken serious when it comes to taking care of  school business. I will achieve this goal by making sure I don't make mistakes when it comes to turning in work. I will remained motivated to become a excellent student this semester  by putting all my effort and determination in achieving my 4.0. In conclusion I have every intention of getting what I want and becoming what I call a star student.

JCCS Academic Language Written Assessment Week 34

Cell phones should not be allowed in schools. In CONTRAST some teacher's believe that electronics could be used as a brand new tool in school, but evidence has yet to prove that it is not a distraction in a classroom setting. Some kids do not have the right CRITIQUE on when it is appropriate time to bring cell phones out in class, yet again leaving us to believe that they cannot handle the responsibility of being trusted. Teacher's with strict rules still have problems PERSUADING their students to leave their electronics out of eyesight and in their bags. Although, upperclassman have shown the ability to only use their phones for educated purposes some children just can't handle the anxiety of not answering their phones when receiving a message. In conclusion, kids cannot be trusted to only use their cell phones at appropriate times.

JCCS Academic Language Written Assessment Week 33

American students are not falling behind in academics.COMPARED to other countries we have better resources and a better chance at getting a good job. The RANGE of student capabilities vary between each student. Although, in other countries the students have more determination because their life styles aren't as fortunate. The school system here is a lot less complicated because we can collect DATA about students and their education level, so if they need help they can receive it. In conclusion, America has a better education system, and we are successful in academics.