I would want a car that drives itself. For example, the technology of the car would help our society PROCEED in making better adjustments to the way people drive today. This shows that, having advanced technology would benefit our society rather than complicating it further. This also shows that, drivers wouldn't be so nervous while if they had a little extra help behind the wheel. In addition, accidents wouldn't OCCUR as much as they do now if a machine was in charge of the wheel. Drivers would not only improve their driving METHODS, but will be able to experience the technology of the new age. This shows that, people would learn new driving techniques. This also shows that, they will get their money's worth by getting two in one. In conclusion,a car that can operate on their own would better our society and advance our technology.
Thursday, March 7, 2013
Academic Language Written Assessment Week 26
I would want a car that drives itself. For example, the technology of the car would help our society PROCEED in making better adjustments to the way people drive today. This shows that, having advanced technology would benefit our society rather than complicating it further. This also shows that, drivers wouldn't be so nervous while if they had a little extra help behind the wheel. In addition, accidents wouldn't OCCUR as much as they do now if a machine was in charge of the wheel. Drivers would not only improve their driving METHODS, but will be able to experience the technology of the new age. This shows that, people would learn new driving techniques. This also shows that, they will get their money's worth by getting two in one. In conclusion,a car that can operate on their own would better our society and advance our technology.
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It is obvious that you put a lot of thought into this paragraph. I want you to work on strengthening your ideas by adding specific concrete details from outside sources. Keep up the positive effort.
ReplyDeleteThis is really well written Keo'na good job. I like that you add pictures to go along with your paragraphs.
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