JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 4

Parents should regulate their kids diet. What children eat in their childhood can CONSIST of terrible eating habits when they are able to decide for themselves. Parents should want an APPROPRIATE diet for their children so they can be as healthy as they can be. Doing this for their children can help a big problem we have in America to day. Also, their children won't have any problems in the future FOCUSING on healthy foods and exercise. In conclusion, this shows that parents should care about their kids future and want them healthy so they can be role models for other people.

Choices - Week 3- blog post

What is something I dislike about myself?
I would have to say my patience with people. One reason is, I'm to nice and I let people run over me when I know they're doing it. The one thing that really gets me is when people take me for granted and they know I'm not the arguing type. When I blow up on them and they want to know why I have such a bad attitude I tell them and they usually leave me alone after that. Second reason is, it's one of my best qualities and that's what I get recognized for the most. Third reason is, I never really speak my mind unless it's necessary. So, if someone is trying to start an argument with me I would just talk calmly and that makes them look like the bad guy. In conclusion, having patience can be a good thing and a bad thing, but overall I'm glad I have it because I have to deal with the people on this campus.

English 10 Academic Vocabulary Paragraph

You should go to jail for harassing someone via text and on social networks. One reason is, if you really have a problem with somebody you should confront them not harrass them when they are in the comfort of their home. Some people are AFFECTED differentely by verbal abuse because it's strictly mental not physical. Second reason is, studies show that some people are not able to MAINTAIN a good sense of mind when they are verbally abused on a daily basis. In addition, people shouldn't have to go through that everyday.This shows that, pushing someone's boundaries are not good because you do not no their limits. For example, bullies will go the extra mile just to make someone's life hell because they have problems of their own. This also shows that, if you can waste time attacking people by using TEXT, then I think that person can spend some time in jail and think about their own problems for a while.

JCCS Academic Language Written Assessment Week 38

Video games should be used in school curriculum. Children learn the ASPECT new subjects when they are interactive during school activities. Kids like to be connected to there school work. The CONSEQUENCES of being in tune with your work is very good results. Educational games make people happy and they pay more attention to certain FEATURE'S when they are having fun. Games in a school setting is a great idea and will have better outcomes and children will want to participate more during school.

JCCS Academic Language Written Assessment Week 37

The fast food industry should not be able to target kids with unhealthy food choices. One reason is, targeting on SECTION of children is considered rude and inconsiderate knowing they don't make correct choices. There is a THEORY that the food items served in restaurants hold more calories than a regular meal at home. Additionally, some of the food you can make at home are SIMILAR in looks as the food in restaurants, but way more unhealthy. Food at home is way better than restaurant cookery any day because it saves you money and from gaining unnecessary weight that could be avoided. The food industry loves to trap people who are weak in judgement when it comes to food because they know they choose wrong.

JCCS Academic Language Written Assessment Week 35

Sweatshops are a violation of human rights. One reason is, Every freedom law APPLIES to everyone who is a citizen in the United States. Another reason is, when people make a CONTRACT with their employers they did not agree to be treated like an animals, and be taken advantage of because of their desperation for work. When people work for their bosses they should have an accurate LABOR time on how many hours they work a week and a day. Nobody deserves to be mistreated when they are doing some other person's job.Their work sight in which they work at should have proper conditions such as air conditioning, bathroom, and lunch breaks. In conclusion, Everybody has equal rights to be treated human when it comes working and trying to make a living for themselves.

Academic Update Blog Paragraph

My academic goal is to not procrastinate and not fall behind on my classwork and homework.

This task involves not getting distracted by my peers, personal issues, and remain serious during my classes.

I want to do this because I do not want summer school and I want to be taken serious when it comes to taking care of  school business. I will achieve this goal by making sure I don't make mistakes when it comes to turning in work. I will remained motivated to become a excellent student this semester  by putting all my effort and determination in achieving my 4.0. In conclusion I have every intention of getting what I want and becoming what I call a star student.

JCCS Academic Language Written Assessment Week 34

Cell phones should not be allowed in schools. In CONTRAST some teacher's believe that electronics could be used as a brand new tool in school, but evidence has yet to prove that it is not a distraction in a classroom setting. Some kids do not have the right CRITIQUE on when it is appropriate time to bring cell phones out in class, yet again leaving us to believe that they cannot handle the responsibility of being trusted. Teacher's with strict rules still have problems PERSUADING their students to leave their electronics out of eyesight and in their bags. Although, upperclassman have shown the ability to only use their phones for educated purposes some children just can't handle the anxiety of not answering their phones when receiving a message. In conclusion, kids cannot be trusted to only use their cell phones at appropriate times.

JCCS Academic Language Written Assessment Week 33

American students are not falling behind in academics.COMPARED to other countries we have better resources and a better chance at getting a good job. The RANGE of student capabilities vary between each student. Although, in other countries the students have more determination because their life styles aren't as fortunate. The school system here is a lot less complicated because we can collect DATA about students and their education level, so if they need help they can receive it. In conclusion, America has a better education system, and we are successful in academics.

JCCS Academic Language Written Assessment Week 32

A student should not have to pass a high school exit exam in order to earn a high school diploma.One reason is, the cost to DISTRIBUTE the test could be really expensive and some students don't have the resources or the money to pay the fee for the exam. Another reason is, students shouldn't have to pass a test  before OBTAINING a diploma, becasue they should be prepared if they already went through four years of high scool. Additionaly,the The subjects in which the students should be tested in VARY from what jobs they wish to acquire. This makes it difficult to test the students on the right skills. In conclusion, Students should always be able to graduate and get a diploma if their grades and effort is put forth. I disaagree with the paragraph, but all the words go with no.

Academic Language Week 31 - Teen Vandals

Parents of teen vandals should not be held responsible for their child's damage. One reason is because their children will not be able to ACHIEVE a better understanding if their mistakes are not paid for correctly. If the child is not given a SPECIFIC punishment for the damage, they will never be able to function in a society if they do not understand the rules. Children need to COMPUTE their consequences without an adults help. In conclusion, parents should not be responsible for their child's actions.

Academic Language Week 30 - "D" Grades

D grades should not be eliminate. It would be to complicated trying to keep up your grades. Kids with learning disabilities might get frustrated with the grading system and give up trying. It would be harder trying to keep up with the education than just giving up.

Academic Language Week 29 - School Conferences

Parents should not face jail time for missing their child's school conference. One reason is because parents shouldn't have to be present at a conference because there are other ways of TRANSFERRING information about their child. Using emails is a good RESOURCE of contacting the parent about their child's behavior and grades. If the child does not SEEK help from the parent then they can always go to their teacher for assistance. It can be very difficult for parents to take time out of their work schedule to attend a conference for their child. It is very important for children to get a good education, but it can be very hard for parents to always be apart of their kid's education. Jail time is unnecessary for parents as long as the child is being cared for.

Trayvon Martin Paragraph

George Zimmerman should be charged with murder for shooting Trayvon Martin. He does not have any right to take the life of a teenage boy who was obviously innocent. I thought that our country was rid of racial acts against each other, my thoughts were clearly wrong. This man has noticeable traits of being conspicuously absurd by taking matters into his own hands and killing this exemplary young boys short lived life. He should have already been taken into a psychiatric ward if he thinks that he was going to be harmed by a 140 pound boy who was caring ice tea and a bag of skittles. The odds are not going to be in his favor if he was taken to the courts. I am glad to hear that his parents are educated and are able to take this to the media so that justice is brought to this monstrous man. He should not be given the condonation of prospering in society if he is going to bring harm to anymore young black males that he is always succeeding. This situation will only upraise until the law is change in Florida he will not get away with this racist act against this blossoming young man.

JCCS Academic Language Written Assessment Week 28 Practice Paragraph

G.P.S devices should be required for habitually truant students. The person that ADMINISTERS the device might be able to keep track of the student much more efficiently if they knew where the students was at all times. The rebellious student could learn how to have the proper CONDUCT if they are constantly reminded of the device connected to them physically. The person who issued the system to the student could use the ELEMENT of surprise when the student is off track and being defiant towards attending school. This system could be really effective and keep students more on track with their lives. They could also get the education that they need in order to be successful. 

Rain, Vacation, or Zombies vs Vampires Blog Post Paragraph

I would rather be bitten by a vampire. With a vampire attack their could be more perks or doom for your life. Vampires are far more powerful then a rotten corpse walking around growling things at you. In the time of the attack you could just be bitten and turned into on of them or they would possibly just use you as dinner. Zombie's on the other hand are a totally different story. They eat your flesh while you are still conscience and writhing in pain while they continue to devour every ounce left of you. If certain events were to occur and you bitten were bitten, you become extremely beautiful and indestructible with unbelievably super strength. I would rather become a vampire because I would become even more awesome than I am now.

JCCS Academic Language Written Assessment Week 27 Practice Paragraph

School officials do have the right to use drug- sniffing dogs to find drugs.One reason is, these dogs are trained to RESPOND to the smell of the drugs and other substances that are illegal. People don't have the same abilities to ASSUME that someone actually has drugs on them, but dogs could recognize the smell immediately. The dogs that are used for this task go through the PROCESS training to get the smells right and to be able to pin point what location the drugs are held. These are highly effective and they should be used everywhere.

Testing Thoughts Blog Paragraph

I feel that taking the California High School Exit Exam is necessary and should be taken more seriously. I know that next year I have to make sure that I try my hardest and to do my best in passing the exam next year. I am a little concerned that some sophomores don't take the test seriously and might fail to pass it. I will make sure that all measures are taken in order to pass the exam. I am confident that I could pass the test with flying colors because I am able to pay attention in class, and I have the determination to fulfill my goals of not taking the test more than once. When I see my CAHSEE scores next year I hope to see 100 in both English and Math.

JCCS Academic Language Written Assessment Week 26 Practice Paragraph

I would not want a car that drives itself. When we PROCEED to make things that make us less independent we become more lazier in our everyday lives. If the car's computer was to have a malfunction a fatal accident could OCCUR for the driver, and the other drivers sharing the road. The METHOD of making our country dependent on technology could possibly enhance our economy or make go down the drain even more. Our country needs to focus more on ways to save us rather than ways of making it easier to get around in machines that could be causing the problems we have today with global warming.