Academic Language Written Assessment Week 27

School officials do have the right to have drug sniffing dogs. For example, without these precautions people would be able to smuggle illegal drugs that much easier. This shows that, officials should be able to ACCUSE students and search them in order to protect the greater good. This also shows that, the selling and distributing would be shorten by a substantial amount. In addition, the PROCESS of the search dogs would be more beneficial and efficient before the students have chance to use the drugs. This shows that, the dogs could RESPOND before the drugs effect a school campus and spread its poison. In conclusion, drug sniffing dogs would benefit the schools in a positive way and stop a problem before it starts.

Academic Language Written Assessment Week 26

I would want a car that drives itself. For example, the technology of the car would help our society PROCEED in making better adjustments to the way people drive today. This shows that, having advanced technology would benefit our society rather than complicating it further. This also shows that, drivers wouldn't be so nervous while if they had a little extra help behind the wheel. In addition, accidents wouldn't OCCUR as much as they do now if a machine was in charge of the wheel. Drivers would not only improve their driving METHODS, but will be able to experience the technology of the new age. This shows that, people would learn new driving techniques. This also shows that, they will get their money's worth by getting two in one. In conclusion,a car that can operate on their own would better our society and advance our technology.

Academic Language Written Assessment Week 24

Online learning is an effective way to educate students. For example, kids are able to have more resources for projects and assignments. This shows that, the internet could be used in a positive way by supplying more information. This also shows that, you would be able to DIFFERENTIATE information from websites and textbooks to see alternate point of views. Students would learn to acquire more technical skills when they are using the computer constantly. This shows that, students would be up to date with advance technology and would be prepared for the future when it evolves  even further. This also shows that, teachers would n't have to CLARIFY when students need help with a skill in the future because you pick up skills along the way. Students would become technical pros in this AREA of technology by the time they graduate. In conclusion, using technology for education is a great way to keep up technology and use your resources wisely.

Academic Language Written Assessment Week 23

Dog fighting should be illegal. For example, it is inhumane and defeats the purpose of nonviolence. This shows that, animals of any kinds should be treated like any person should. This also shows that, animals have feelings just as developed as humans. In addition, animals should not be used as entertainment especially when they are being put in danger. This shows that, animals should not be anybody's source of amusement dead or alive. This also shows that, animals should not be pent against each other if they are meant to harm one another. The people who house and allow these events to occur should be put in jail, because this act is just as bad as putting your child in danger. In conclusion, people should not be allowed to be harm for profit and should be allowed to live life without corruption.

Academic Language Written Assessment Week 22

Felons should not be allowed to vote. For example, if a persons crime is so COMPLEX that they are considered a felon, then they should not be allowed to contribute to society with their opinions. This shows that, their crime was so terrible that they could not even be put with the normal criminals, so why should they have a say in what goes about in the country? This also shows that, their judgement in what is right and what is wrong is quite questionable even after they complete their sentence. Their opinion is IRRELEVANT to this country. For example, if you can murder someone in cold blood and go to sleep with a smile on your face then you can live with the consequences. This shows that, some peoples decision are best left alone and the responsibility should be left to the sane people. SOURCES say that even after felons have done their time that still are not all their and can't function in society as they would like to. In conclusion, Felons should not be given the responsibility or opportunity to have a say in the way the country operates.

Academic Language Written Assessment Week 21

Performance enhancing drugs, such as steroids should not be allowed in sports. It is a TRADITION to have a position on a sports team based off of your own physical and mental strength. This shows that, taking synthetic drugs would not reflect any of these qualities and should not be allowed to participate if using. There was a PERIOD in time when people enjoyed using their strength to complete strenuous tasks and didn't depend on a drug that does more harm than good. This shows that, by betting on this drug it would only harm you in the future. Performance enhancers are the PRIMARY results of people having health problems after using them. This shows that, the results might have immediate and life changing appearance but you will sacrifice your health in the future. In conclusion, synthetic drugs have no place in sports and players should not risk their health and reputation for fifteen minutes of testosterone boost and severe mood swings.

Academic vocabulary assessment week 20

Students should have a failing grade for plagerizing. For example school is for self assesssment and what your knowledge can bring to the table. This shows that students should our forth their own effort on the DOCUMENTS given to them. Peoples ACADEMICS should come before they decislde to jepordize it with falty decisions. This shows if people put as much effort into their classwork otherthan cheating they would have better results in their grades. Students should have a MAXIMUM amount of how many quotes they can put into their writing assignments. This shows that their should be a acceptable amount of resources and facts based on research. In conclusion, students should not be using someone else words and knowledge to gain an easy grade.