Academic Language Written Assessment Week 10

Women should not be required to sign up for the draft. For example, men have always held the responsibility of fighting for our country. This shows that, it's a FACTOR that women should not have to fight in a mans quarrel. This also shows that, women shouldn't have to be put in a situation where she has to leave her children just because men can't keep the peace. In addition, men purposely PLOT to use a women's freedom as a reason to sign up and go to war. This shows that, men have taken advantage against women just because we chose to use our VOICE to gain out natural rights. This also shows that, women can choose to join the military on their own accord, but they shouldn't have to be forced. In conclusion, men should stick to being the fighters of this country and women should be able to do as they wish.

Academic Language Assessment week 9

Vending machines should be banned from high schools. For example, students spend more time and money on the snack utilities other than their studies. This shows that, they should pack an ALTERNATIVE healthy snack if they know they're going to get hungry in the middle of the day. This also shows that, kids eating habits are not disciplined enough to make healthy food choices for themselves if half of their allowance is spent on junk food. If students still get hungry in the middle of the day they should make a STRATEGY so that they are not making unhealthy lifestyle choices. I'm not bashing on all vending machines, because some of the machines offer healthier food items. For example, in hospitals they offer fruit and alternative snack items.In my PREVIOUS school they encouraged children to bring fruits and vegetables for snack instead of heart attack food that will effect them later in life. In conclusion, vending machines should be kept at bay in high schools so eating habits in the future will not have a bad outcome.

Academic Language Written Assessment Week 8

The ten commandments do not belong in public schools. For example, the content of the CATEGORY might be a sensitive subject for some people to handle. This shows that, Mixing religion and school subjects is not a good idea because it could cloud the judgement of  a teacher and his/her teaching methods. This also shows that, the important subjects that kids need to learn might not be paid attention to, because time can be CONSUMED by the teachers personal beliefs. Their are private schools for religion if the parents want the subject to be taught to their children. For example, the private schools offer special classes that teach and also preach about different religions. This shows that, public schools do not need to teach these subjects because you can pay a fee to have your children attend certain schools if you wish. Being religious is a personal reference and not everybody believes in religion. Religion shouldn't have to play a ROLE in education if you do not have a desire to participate in churchgoing activities. In conclusion, the separation between church and state should the same because it would prevent complications from occurring.

Keona's Paperless Classroom Orientation

Keona's Paperless Classroom Orientation Unit Assessment 2012

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Academic Language Written Assessment Week 5 9/27

Vaccinations should be required for all children. One reason is, the children should be able to be sent to school without the worry of catching a dangerous disease. Children are far more vulnerable to virus's because their immune system is not that strong for the hard hitting illness's. Second reason is, the vaccines have a 90 out of 100% chance that you will get POSITIVE results from the treatment. For example, measles broke out among unimmunized immigrant children in South Califorina causing an ESTIMATE of 43,000 cased and 101 deaths. If these people took the initiative and got the regimen they would have had a better chance of surviving this epidemic breakout. Third reason is, the children getting their immunization done while they are young can ILLUSTRATE a bright and better future for their health. In conclusion, Vaccines have a better chance at preventing an epidemic of sickness and giving people a chance to have hope.

academic assessment week 5

The pressure in tern sports has gone too far. One reason is some parents CONSTRUCT a schedule based on their sports, and they still expect their children to perform well in their studies. Although, sports do offer a SIGNIFICANT amount if scholarships, but their grades and focus led are sacrificed. Third reason is, some teenagers don't know how to IDENTIFY their priorities and academic goals. In conclusion, academics should be everybodies priority not sports.